Comments by Tracer
- "Quite a piece of work here, makes you think a lot more without all the punctuation and capitol letters. Really pushes the emotion on you...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "memory" by darkangelXlll
- "Different take on not being cared for by someone whom you loved but did not return that feeling, "my essence is
bleeding", great imagery...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "Naked" by finaldestiny
- "Well, interesting, I think a lack of punctuation makes you think harder, makes you focus in certain places, nice...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on ""life"" by darkangelXlll
- "Maybe the point of the poem is not to show cliches, but to actually SHOW emotion, I'm sure in your writing you have written things many have written over and over again, nothing is cliche anymore, rather, everything is cliche, it was a good poem, from a g"
Posted by Tracer on "~till the hounds of hell~" by darkangelXlll
- ""We’ll run away, ashamed.
Declare this love", such is the power of love expressed in a splendid manner, simply beautiful write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "fix me" by Exodus
- "I read this several times, each racing my mind into fantasmic wonders, very light hearted and erotic poem...very nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "Leitmotif" by purr_verse
- "I really liked the flow of this piece and the overwhelming grip it had that just pulled you in and made it you...nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "of the unknown" by Invader Lyn
- "Very simple, but conveying a complex emotion, I can see where this is coming from..."My body becoming nothing more than a mere vessel for pain.", I like your use of metaphors...nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "Sadness" by darkness_descends
- "My family put up a flag poll and it is still there, so not everyone is like that. However, this is true for a lot of America, "Unity" one minute, and back to commercialism, nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "jerking off in the reflecting pool" by theBAC
- ""While they struck your name from history, And threw you to the sharks", powerful words, but I couldn't agree more, nice write...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "Lilith" by LoneWolf
- "Sadly, a lot of us know about this feeling, however it may feel, your "destiny for a doomed life" will get better...^vTracer^"
Posted by Tracer on "The Story of My Life" by Lost_Soul
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