Pierce My Soul

By Mistress Morbid

Cradle my senses
In your arms
As you sing me
A sweet lullaby

Caress my thoughts
Filled with a
Joyous dance
Of a forbidden land

Gaze into my
Glass eyes
And know that
You melt away
My sorrows
Of yesterday

Thank you

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Published on Sunday, March 28, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Pierce My Soul"

On Sunday, November 12, 2017, worm (1149) wrote:

I hope you will get this comment... come write more...
On Friday, March 4, 2005, Mr King (547) wrote:

beautiful... absolutely...
On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384) wrote:

aww so sweet *melts* Jons a lucky guy
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Liath (35) wrote:

The comfort of another is the sweetest cure of all. You've captured this perfectly. =)
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

this is simply beautiful...it is so touching with wonderful word combinations... it left me with a feeling of being safe and secure. *sigh* Fox
On Monday, March 29, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Thats what I was trying to portray, I guess I did what was intended. Thank you! =)
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

Nice poem of hope and happiness, small but nice write, but nobody ever said short was bad...^vTracerv^
On Monday, March 29, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Nope not bad at all (reffering to short poems in general), I think the shorter it is, the more direct and to the point it is.
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (114) wrote:

IT HITS HOME. LESS, IS MORE.
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

....*heart explodes*
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

::huggles::