The Story of My Life

By Lost_Soul

Walking down a dark path
Destined for a doomed life

Predetermined for failure
Never understood by anyone

Constantly turning the other cheek
Ridiculed for being myself

Always stumbling into despair
Afraid to say whats on my mind

Masking my true feelings
Pushing everyone away

Sitting here in loneliness

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Copyright 2004 Lost_Soul
Published on Friday, January 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This could be perfectly the story of my life too.. Great work! :)

  • brudie On Monday, December 2, 2013, brudie (14)By person wrote:

    Very good indeed. Me too.

  • Void Vortex On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    Nice write, story of my life too!

  • A former member wrote: I can relate 100%. Great work.

  • A former member wrote: wow, i can relate... but u have to be urself. Be original, and to those who dont accept it, fuck em! cause there just jelous of wht there not. Stay strong

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    very nicely done...its simple yet says so much...I'll be awaiting more hopefully soon :)

  • urbanhumility On Monday, November 22, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    you are truly felt here...........urban

  • A former member wrote: amazing musical taste... ;)

  • MABUS On Monday, August 30, 2004, MABUS (20)By person wrote:

    this is really good...hope to see more in the future. and remember keep your chin up it only gets better from here. i know i also went through depression

  • nobody-in_the_darkness On Friday, June 25, 2004, nobody-in_the_darkness (12)By person wrote:

    not alot of words but tones of feelings i can relate so i love it alot ~nobody~

  • aXe FactoR On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    you dont need a lot of words to bring across your thoughts, i admire that. please write more, cant wait 2 see more fine works :) -MeL-

  • A former member wrote: this is really touching since i kno how you feel there are times where i feel like i cant get any where awsome write you can really capture the meaning of true life situations

  • A former member wrote: I feel your pain, my friend. Nice write...I like your style.

  • Tracer On Sunday, March 7, 2004, Tracer (99)By person wrote:

    Sadly, a lot of us know about this feeling, however it may feel, your "destiny for a doomed life" will get better...^vTracer^ Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I can't say that I know what you mean, for I've never gone through it. Nice? =-MO-= Scholar

  • Raze Drake On Saturday, February 7, 2004, Raze Drake (85)By person wrote:

    ah, true, so true.

  • hopeless On Monday, February 2, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    this is a perfect description of the life most of us live.... *hug* u seem to need it... ~hopeless

  • Lost_Soul On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Lost_Soul (34)By person wrote:

    awwhhh....thanks. *hugs back*

  • Mischevious Princess On Saturday, January 31, 2004, Mischevious Princess (28)By person wrote:

    Matt, You'll always have me :) You're my friend and I value your life oh so much.

  • Lost_Soul On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Lost_Soul (34)By person wrote:

    yeah and I want to thank you for always being there for me whenever my life seems to lose its meaning.

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