~till the hounds of hell~

By darkangelXlll

slice slice cut cut right right left arms blood blood tears tears drip drop fall and crawl through the floor and through the ground till the hounds of hell the burning flames the burning walls of the home of hate the home of the evil crul and unwanted. death or life? happiness or sadness? good or bad? love or hate? does it all really matter in the end?

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Published on Wednesday, March 24, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "~till the hounds of hell~"

A former member wrote: When it comes to does it matter in the end really depends on how ya view things! you put it in a good view tho-! i like it! keep writing~!~
On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Munkey (79) wrote:

Every rose has it's thorns but it makes it no less beautiful. So I would say in the end it really doesn't metter but we had an ok time while it was burning down wouldn't you. ;) Keep it dark. -Chance-
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...all twisty and turny, but definitely there...I dig violence, and you delivered...nice... Darun
On Friday, April 2, 2004, Necromancer (71) wrote:

*worships the ground darkangelXIII walks on. You I believe are better then most poets who's work I've read. I love it ~Justin
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

No, love and hate are the same thing, as Twi would put it. What much does it matter. Well done. -Morb
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...yep, we kill for love and hate...and quite the same way, I'd like to add...pain takes no sides... -Darun
On Monday, March 29, 2004, nightshade (118) wrote:

actually i have to disagree with clementine how many times have our very words been thought or spoken before and how many more time will they be spoken again i say ages upon ages my friend i really think you should spell check before you post however othe
On Monday, March 29, 2004, nightshade (118) wrote:

rwise i think it is wonderful and it real pulls you forward into a whirling malestrom of pain felt by the writer great work
On Saturday, March 27, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

wow, flaims is really spelled flames, though but still very impressive
On Friday, March 26, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

Maybe the point of the poem is not to show cliches, but to actually SHOW emotion, I'm sure in your writing you have written things many have written over and over again, nothing is cliche anymore, rather, everything is cliche, it was a good poem, from a g
On Friday, March 26, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

ood writter...^vTracerv^
On Friday, March 26, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

Oh look, irony, I misspelled writer.
On Friday, March 26, 2004, Clementine (121) wrote:

does it matter in the end? yes if you cant spell, and write unintresting works....sorry if that was harsh, im not trying to come off as the best writer ever, or even a good one....just someone who thinks you could write better and not right cliche' shit.
On Friday, March 26, 2004, Clementine (121) wrote:

ooo how ironic, i mispelled Write ;)
A former member wrote: I like that one! A LOT! Where'd you get the inspiration for that? Or did it just come to you like me writing about killing some one...ha ha ha...which I DIDN'T! Well...I still have several more to read...LoL Later~ MicHeLLe
A former member wrote: i agree with both demonslave n funguy! i totally loved this 1! but it would flow better with more of a formatt to it. great job as usual.
A former member wrote: Nice flow. Fantastic.
On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, yslehc (334) wrote:

nice write as usual... annd yes i'd have to say i agree with demon, i think you should try to format your poems a little, instead of making them ALL the same.. but still, good job
On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

heh .. heh ... cool stream ...action poetry ... dig the violence without tidy ending ... cool ... funguy