CUT!CUT!CUT! (for mysticventures)

By Zhee

In the undulating flow
Of red crystalline springs,
You drown, my broken angel
Cursing your splintered wings.

[The blade screams (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Pretend your flesh is theirs,
If you cut far enough, maybe
God will hear your prayersâ€¦]

See the cathartic glow
Within the rents you create,
Behold the open wound â€“
Bleeding out your hate.

[The voices wail (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Till porcelain skin turns gray,
If the mind is numb, maybe
These demons will go awayâ€¦]

Slashed on a razorâ€™s edge
Choking memories smiled,
Etched within your soul
Immaculate dreams defiled.

[The demons plead (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Down to the very bone,
If you cut deep enough, maybe
Daddy will leave you aloneâ€¦]

(just another perspective on cutting.. as eloquently portrayed by mysticventures' "a cutter's hymn")
P.S. I don't support cutting either!

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Published on Monday, September 20, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "CUT!CUT!CUT! (for mysticventures)"

On Thursday, January 27, 2005, knightmirror (426) wrote:

remarkable dedication....beautiful aliteration....****-knight
A former member wrote: your vocabulary is astonishing =)
On Saturday, November 13, 2004, darkangelXlll (107) wrote:

WOW! bravo...this is such an amazin write i really loved it. i wasnt going to read it cuz the title but WOW glad i did! ~darlin :D
On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

Amen! Kill them if their stupid enough to wana die...here how 'bout we slit your wrists FOR you...?
On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

*anti-cut* however, you still write beautifully Zhee...
On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah (218) wrote:

I do support cutting, being a cutter/burner, myself. So I loved this!! Awesome work
On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen (370) wrote:

i think my own demons are screaming from this. great write zhee
On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, stuart_pid (135) wrote:

i think you may have it. i particularly liked the line, "if the mind is numb, maybe these demons will go away." another fantastic piece zhee.
On Monday, September 20, 2004, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

As I have said.. I love poems on cutting.. My Mate and I both do. but I think we see it different than most.. This was beautifully worded. Well done. -Michael
A former member wrote: Hi Zhee! I have a poem entitled "CUTTING ROOM FLOOR", which I'll post so you can see some (not so) subtle differences on the subject. I just read this, and then thought of my own material.
On Monday, September 20, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

and thank you Zhee :)
On Monday, September 20, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

excellent work! truely much more elegant than mine as well !!!