"life"

By darkangelXlll

as i sit here waiting
waiting
for life to finally
come to an end
for time to finally pass by
and decide to take me along with it
life
life is nothing
life is pain
hate
and misery

what's it worth to breath
what's it worth to walk
talk
run
rise
sit
laugh or even giggle

when you cant even have the simplicity of
joy and happiness

what's it worth

tears begin to drop down my cheeks
slowly wetting my face
leaving stains
leaving permeant trace
to the thought of how much i desire to disappear
into the fine mist of air
and be forgotten
and erased
from every-ones thoughts
dreams
and nightmare
to be erased from every-ones past

those thoughts frightens me
they give me shivers and chills down my back
they raise even the smallest hairs behind my neck
those thoughts give me a pain
so big and strong and buried deep inside my soul
it hurts to know IM useless
and worthless
it hurts to know I want to die
and that IM giving up
it hurts
I cry and cry
my eyes begin to get sore

that's it im done
and that's all ive decides to take

this is the end.

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Published on Monday, March 29, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on ""life""

A former member wrote: Original and well-portrayed...you hold your reader captive from start to end...I see progression in all of your writes.
On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, Munkey (79) wrote:

you have some hardcore feelings going on in all your writeings it makes fore some greeting reading thanks for sharing -Munkey-
A former member wrote: you commented to me now that i remember that we wrote similarly now i see why the only difference is i like your's more then mine my eyes just read something beautiful.
On Friday, April 2, 2004, Necromancer (71) wrote:

*begins to fan his queen. lovely work. i just love your style of writing. ~Justin
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

I like how you do some of these, I feel as if I need to get them all out in one breath, hectic and rapid; gives them a nice edge. ~ mw
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Definately and Intrigueing write. I agree with morbid. The structure is really very interesting. Nice work.
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Interesting...like a big block of pain waiting to be stabbed so that it can spill to the floor. I like it. -Morb
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

P.S. - The lack of "punctuation" and some sort of structure is what gives it appeal. ;)
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Demosthenes (155) wrote:

well. i was going to suggest punctuation, but apparently its an artsy thing, so i wont. -B
A former member wrote: sad but inspiring. this inspired me to tell you what someone told me when i wanted to die: "why give poeple the satisfaction of knowing they ruined your life by dying?" think about that when u want to die. live and fight. ~toxic
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

live live don't give in
On Monday, March 29, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

Well, interesting, I think a lack of punctuation makes you think harder, makes you focus in certain places, nice...^vTracerv^
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

i wish for you the best i hope in future ill be reading poems from you that reflect how well things are in your life but for now ill read with joy your immense talent, i love all your work, your so amazing