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Naked
By finaldestiny
im standing right before your eyes
naked
my feelings and soul open to you
with nothing to
hide
the chassis within has been broken
free
take a look at me
and discover
i
am
me
hate me because I live the life
you aspire
although my mind may
conform
my heart and soul will not
I stand before you
naked
my essence is
bleeding
with emotion
that you cannot perceive
my wound is getting
deeper
and my pain more evident
tears
of blood run down
I grab a tissue
but blood continues
my hearts stops
to realize
you dont care
at least I
tried
but I must leave
to find another who will
undress
me.
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Copyright 2004 finaldestiny
Published on Monday, March 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Naked"
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On Friday, June 16, 2006, kiss of the dark
(32)
wrote:
you wear your heart on your sleeve...a spiritual and religious unwrapping of your feelings and emotions...so sad
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
Different take on not being cared for by someone whom you loved but did not return that feeling, "my essence is bleeding", great imagery...^vTracerv^
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
well put, i hope you find someone worthy to undress you
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