Relationship

By Invader Lyn

what it was
what was meant to be
what it is
what will never be

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Copyright 2004 Stellar
Published on Friday, March 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Too common, too often. -END-

  • aXe FactoR On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    wow, 4 short sentences & a whole lota power. greatness in mere few words. wonderful! *thumbs up

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, April 29, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    lol.. sure is evil.. I totaly agree with Tiger.. btw nice going. I like it short :O) Monkey

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~ss

  • SilentStalker On Friday, March 26, 2004, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...saw it that time too...we were thinking the same when you first posted this...probably still are... -Darun Scholar

  • Tracer On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Tracer (100)By person wrote:

    I agree, this was done well, short and to the point...^vTracerv^ Scholar

  • Alanarchy On Friday, March 12, 2004, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    I love condensed poetry when it is done well. This was excellent. The length only gives substance to the title and how long a bad relationship can last. A great point written wonderfully. Well done.

  • Drea On Friday, March 12, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    relationship BAW! What's the point they always end the sam...oops sorry lol So short, to the point, no bullshitting. *Fav*

  • Blinded_Tiger On Friday, March 12, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Evil poem! *pointing fingers for a few minutes, and favors* Tiger

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