The Reason

By DarkDesire

Think I found the reason,
the main reason.
I get so depressed without you,
so quickly.
I believe it's because,
I'm the kind of person
who needs to feel loved,
and needs to feel cared for.
And I need a constant reminder,
or else I forget.
Your love,
you care,
fulfills my need.
It's the only thing for me.
And being with you,
I know it's true.
Your eyes,
their depth,
they show the love and care
that you speak of.
You emotions seem so much more...
Alive.
Your words finally seem true.
Although, there is more...
I need to feel safe.
I'm so frightened when I'm alone.
And nowhere in the world,
can compare to being in your arms.
I feel so helpless everywhere else.
It's like your arms were made to hold me,
and your lips meant to kiss me.
You have the missing pieces,
to my life's picture.
Without you,
I could never be complete,
and my life would be meaningless.
I'm miserable without you,
and nothing will ever change that.

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Copyright 2004 DarkDesire
Published on Tuesday, July 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is amazing. I love how this has no structure but has structure at the same time.

  • A former member wrote: This is extremely well-spoken.

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, July 13, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    amen... i can relate so much its not even funny.. but im sure you've done an opposite poem and told the person to fuck off or something like that.. but this poem does trip off my feelings now and then.. it was pretty good

  • elisa On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    Those are the perfect words. Sounds like the weight of love. A lot of writen truth in this!

  • A former member wrote: I know this feeling too well. You brught a clear reminer to me of what it's like. My commendations. -END-

  • Invader Lyn On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Invader Lyn (48)By person wrote:

    Wow. I felt all these feelings the exact way that you've portrayed them in this poem. I'm not a big fan of love poems, but I'd call this more of a tragic love poem than just a love poem, which is really awesome.

  • Invader Lyn On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Invader Lyn (48)By person wrote:

    I'm definitely making this one of my favorites. And oh yeah...AFI kick ass!! :P

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