Comments by Magdalena
- "Sometimes a saviour, sometimes a problem, that selective hearing. This piece has many layers and says so much. Great work.
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Posted by Magdalena on "Selective Hearing" by Phalanx
- "This is so beautifully sad, to split the sea speaks of much love.. Wonderful words ana. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "_In" by anaksunamun
- "Even in the dark the mind and senses can still see. A desolate place written beautifully. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Void" by Shadow Colossus
- "The visuals in your words are wonderful. The last line tragic. If someone stood in front of me and said that, I would kick them in the shin :) Nonetheless great work Sir. "
Posted by Magdalena on "A Lament" by Revolting Theatre
- "I imagine a day would be loud with all of that noise. I love how I can silence my mind with my own tenacity and fill it with wonder and hallucinogens play no part in it. That is why, maybe.... Thought provoking and beautiful, lovely lady :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "teddybears." by anaksunamun
- "It makes me think, if you say it enough times, it will instill so deep, that next year, you won't.... I wonder if you did... This is a great piece of writing and well deserved of POTD. "
Posted by Magdalena on "November Rituals" by Rachel
- "This reads like heartache, the beautiful agony kind, somewhere in another place and time. Worthy of a ~sigh~. I look forward to reading more. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "Sins Like Summer" by MorganMoonlight
- "This piece has much potential. You used "ab" rhyme scheme until the last two lines, which lost the rhythm (maybe another word instead of using "time" twice also) otherwise, well done."
Posted by Magdalena on "Coming Together" by mikeygreenleaf
- "This is blazing with emotional colour, imagine how dull apathy would feel/read.. as for the afterlife, we don't know until we get there. It is human nature to catastrophize in our minds before the event. I am a great believer in our thoughts being the blueprints of our future... Great piece. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Death as a still life" by Circe Avalon
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I rhymed for 30+ plus years, when I stepped out of that box I never looked back. Now I write free verse (on the odd occasion a certain form) Rhyming restricted me so much with word usage, now I can use whatever words I desire. Good on you for going in a different direction, it makes things more interesting. Great stuff :)
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Posted by Magdalena on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "A beautiful concept in the first few lines and a magical and dreamy quality throughout. Your pieces always take me out of this world and to another place Ana... :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "Electricity is Ahrimanic." by anaksunamun
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