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mcdonalds coke.
By anaksunamun
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and chainsaws are not for massacres.
first cry of summer priests' return from interior travels , sustained
by no image of itself reflected in avenues of crinkled cloth on the other
sun.
O my celestial hobo torn by thorns, a witchwreck with california wings
who is lost but still knows exactly where he is going.
he has seen the wind, and would you wear his eyes well on a madison black
morning? I turn him off slowly. his astral voice drifting to other planet
rooms and I dance with myself so good, then run far away when he isn't
looking
.
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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, July 16, 2014.
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On Wednesday, January 3, 2018, carlosjackal
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wrote:
I really like how the poem seems to bear no relation to the title yet there feels like a connection somewhere. The details giving just enough glimpses of a story but leaving enough gaps for intrigue and mystery. Very nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
What the hell ...micky d's coke and chainsaws are not for massacres? I just don't get the subject here at all smh
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On Friday, August 8, 2014, Star
(920) wrote:
That's because you don't know how to read poetry. And ana, this was beautiful. I loved the visual you put into place with this. I always love reading your works. It's magical sort of here. Thank you for sharing. ★
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A former member wrote:
Lol shouldn't there be ?
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On Thursday, July 17, 2014, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
I always find your pieces otherwordly/ethereal, not meant for encryption. Wondrous and beautiful. :)
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, haunted
(850) wrote:
just fascinating ana, I love it when you post. your words for me would be very difficult to write and that's why im in awe and that's why I admire you so much. your so unique and a breath of fresh air that I inhale deeply. awesome!
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"I dance with myself so good, then run far away when he isn't looking ." - I love picking through your pieces...very interesting and surreal. : ) Ciao, T/S
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