mcdonalds coke.

By anaksunamun














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and chainsaws are not for massacres.















first cry of summer priests' return from interior travels , sustained by no image of itself reflected in avenues of crinkled cloth on the other sun.
O my celestial hobo torn by thorns, a witchwreck with california wings who is lost but still knows exactly where he is going.
he has seen the wind, and would you wear his eyes well on a madison black morning? I turn him off slowly. his astral voice drifting to other planet rooms and I dance with myself so good, then run far away when he isn't looking .











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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, July 16, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, January 3, 2018, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    I really like how the poem seems to bear no relation to the title yet there feels like a connection somewhere. The details giving just enough glimpses of a story but leaving enough gaps for intrigue and mystery. Very nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: What the hell ...micky d's coke and chainsaws are not for massacres? I just don't get the subject here at all smh

  • Star On Friday, August 8, 2014, Star (879)By person wrote:

    That's because you don't know how to read poetry. And ana, this was beautiful. I loved the visual you put into place with this. I always love reading your works. It's magical sort of here. Thank you for sharing. ★

  • A former member wrote: Lol shouldn't there be ?

  • haunted On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    just fascinating ana, I love it when you post. your words for me would be very difficult to write and that's why im in awe and that's why I admire you so much. your so unique and a breath of fresh air that I inhale deeply. awesome!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "I dance with myself so good, then run far away when he isn't looking ." - I love picking through your pieces...very interesting and surreal. : ) Ciao, T/S Scholar

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