Comments by Spiritus_Frumenti
- ""a tired explosion"...i don't what is it about that line, maybe its the contradiction of it, but it really caught my attention...this whole piece was adamantly expressed like only you can do so...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "collision-" by Exodus
- ""I am flawless but I am weak.. " a contradictory statement that is so real...there's a lot behind this...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "built" by Exodus
- "your work always has a spatial ambivalent and meaningful quality to it, even if at times its impossible to know what exactly it means...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "throw" by Exodus
- "the mark of a true writer, to me, is one who inspires me to do so...with pieces like these, i would never feel a reason to stop writing...gorgeous work...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "wait" by Exodus
- "a powerful shot of honest emotion..."And with the running
Away from yourself. You hate what you see And you turn, its easiest "...i liked this stanza in particular...great write...-l-
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Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Ten 3 (Lib(ra)" by Exodus
- "the only way this would make sense is if the person tossing you is but another entity of yourself...and if this is the case, then it is a suicide poem, indeed..."
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "red, green and blue." by Exodus
- "finally i get to see one of your works..you've commented on so many of my pieces and I keep forgetting to look at your stuff...but this poem is very rapturous..i like it...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "The bitch is screaming.." by Exodus
