succubus
By Exodus
Windigo:
Shes hell wrapped in your arms
she'd do anything.
for your sensual acceptence
into the knowledge of your mind.
smelled of used daisys
innocence the flower
tainted with her soiled blood
mother earth
was a bitch intwined in lovers arms
the water washed into her ocean
and her secrets became one whisper
upon her winded sun dance
un sudden.
unkept. but beautiful messed around with her
shes less than tragic
crossed between her loud and white static
Stars in the TV screen
she was the peace and loving
child.
dancing hand in hand.
circles around the politics and in death of darkness.
Windigo:
She never dies
crawling into the world again
she never wanted to belong
her eyes two rings of fire.
serpent tongue of persuasion and
seduction
the even flow.
crosses over into her concrete garden
of trust. and the broken men along the way
shes some kind of paradox.
some kind of hellion.
tri step the butterfly coached
along the clouds and the summers
twilight serendipity.
a flock of heavens of her immediate grace
cleaned up for the grandparents.
Caption:
Windigo:
Shes heaven wrapped in your arms.
Comments on "succubus"
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
I can't explain what this made me feel, but it was certainly Extraordinary. Great job
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On Saturday, February 21, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
amazing language on this one...you just keep getting better and better...astonishing....-l-
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On Saturday, February 21, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
I got to this from the main page, started reading it, and said to myself, "Wow, this is good! I wonder who it's by?" And then I scrolled up! Awesome job, I like it lots. Serendipity, hellion... great words. Just keep writing!
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On Saturday, February 21, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
This was soothing, reminded me of peace and solitude... It just flowed so effortlessly as if it were floating on a light breeze...beautiful...