some one else is stillthesame

By Exodus







You don’t drown like this


You dance upon the water


Refusing to slip under



You don’t hold on.


You don’t


Surrender.







Where you walk.


I am found.


When you run.


I am found.





You don’t try.


Try to feel it when you


Don’t want to.






Where it hides.


It still shows.





When will you learn about it?





This is a fire that will not decease.

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Copyright 2005 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, March 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    i agree with brenya...there are definitely some meaning in this, perhaps not religious, but exploring interesting ways of adapting such interpretations...-l-

  • A former member wrote: To me, this had some religious undertones. Of course, no one but you should know the meaning, but neverthe less, splendid work. Also, Happy St. Patricks Day!

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