Abandon

By Exodus

Abandon

-I still remember the world
From the eyes of a child
Slowly those feelings
Were clouded by what I know now

Where has my heart gone
An uneven trade for the real world
I want to go back to
Believing in everything and knowing nothing at all

I still remember the sun
Always warm on my back
Somehow it seems colder now

Where has my heart gone
Trapped in the eyes of a stranger
I want to go back to
Believing in everything-

::Field of Innocence:::Evanescence::

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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Trigger On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, Trigger (70)By person wrote:

    Good picture. I'm impressed. -Saeth-

  • Exodus On Sunday, November 6, 2005, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    The text is not my work....it is the work of a band called Evanescence....please be aware...i dont want to take credit for the words only the picture... :)

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    THIS PICTURE TOUCHED SO MANY EMOTIONS BURIED DEEP WITHIN THE SORROW OF A LOST CHILDHOOD.

  • A former member wrote: this made my hair raise beutifully written

  • SilencedAngel On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, SilencedAngel (52)By person wrote:

    oh this one gave me shivers....a great song to go with a wonderful picture...they fits so well together its like they were made for each other...

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    a very sad and pensive picture....astounding...-l-

  • Exodus On Monday, April 26, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    Make sure you guys know I did not write that, those are lyrics of the Band Evanescence....and thank you for all your kind and wonderful comments, greatly appreciated!

  • A former member wrote: This is spectacular...the lyrics only add so much more...wonderfully done.

  • flying_fox On Monday, April 26, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    magnificent picture... I hate to sound so cliched, but in this case,a picture is definitley worth a thousand words. This is disturbing, haunting, extremely eerie. Very impressive indeed.

  • stormtalk On Sunday, April 25, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    You did an awesome job with the lighting on that photograph. Good title, too, and the song fits it beautifully. If you were a book and this your cover, they'd have to change the quote.

  • sweetambrosia On Saturday, April 24, 2004, sweetambrosia (80)By person wrote:

    This picture is so beautifully haunting, the wishfulness it captures brings tears to my eyes, it is filled with such desolation. --sweets

  • capt_funguy On Saturday, April 24, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    wish for the past perfect .. if i knew then , what i know now .. they'd have had to pull me off of a swing like that , and make me go to sleep .. i wouldn't have wasted a minute wanting anything more ... great write , and perfect pic ... thanks ... funguy

  • murder_in_clubland On Friday, April 23, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    wow~ss

  • gracefullytorn On Friday, April 23, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    that is a very powerful strong image

  • A former member wrote: not sure if your intent was to have the red x of death but it is kind of fitting for the lyrics posted

  • A former member wrote: but that image works much better

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