falter
By Exodus
Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant
Some never make it to the town
Where the noise stops
So what if I seem dead to you
::Killing me inside::
Until I don’t matter the way I do-
(Anymore)
You want to shut up
…But you keep speaking
Are your lies…..
Apart of this now?
(You’re making no sense)
And
When I saw the glow::
I thought you had changed.
But you still burn/// me the same
You pushed me out.
I’m unwanted again-
//supposedly
And
Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant
I shattered under your heavy skies
Million pieces
Broken like you again.
Never stop waiting.
But I’m walking fast
Away
Away.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, October 31, 2004, rondant
(58) wrote:
this is a great read, i like you use of words
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On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
a very truthful and efficient write...-l-
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
There are times when you never want to say goodbye, never want to leave...
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Some of your writing i can hear sung as I read it, this being a good example. I like "But you still burn me the same" - that stuck out as particularly original/artfully simple/meaningful. Mmm... poor sun.
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A former member wrote:
This is insanely gorgeous...it blows my mind.
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On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
You really do have beautiful eyes...Windows to the soul, but i cant see past the aesthetic value...
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On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Dull and irrelevant...I've heard that somewhere before...This was listless...A flowing vision of grandeur (Your making no sense) gloriously done
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
like a darting eyed monologue ... always compelling ... reads like it's all here if you read it right ... very cool ... ( like the blue too ) funguy