falter

By Exodus





Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant

Some never make it to the town
Where the noise stops

So what if I seem dead to you


::Killing me inside::
Until I don’t matter the way I do-
(Anymore)

You want to shut up
…But you keep speaking

Are your lies…..

Apart of this now?




(You’re making no sense)



And

When I saw the glow::
I thought you had changed.

But you still burn/// me the same


You pushed me out.

I’m unwanted again-

//supposedly

And




Where the sun died
Dull and irrelevant

I shattered under your heavy skies


Million pieces
Broken like you again.


Never stop waiting.

But I’m walking fast


Away


Away.






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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • rondant On Sunday, October 31, 2004, rondant (58)By person wrote:

    this is a great read, i like you use of words

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    a very truthful and efficient write...-l-

  • Juggalotus On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, Juggalotus (69)By person wrote:

    There are times when you never want to say goodbye, never want to leave...

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Some of your writing i can hear sung as I read it, this being a good example. I like "But you still burn me the same" - that stuck out as particularly original/artfully simple/meaningful. Mmm... poor sun.

  • A former member wrote: This is insanely gorgeous...it blows my mind.

  • Solace On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    You really do have beautiful eyes...Windows to the soul, but i cant see past the aesthetic value...

  • Solace On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Dull and irrelevant...I've heard that somewhere before...This was listless...A flowing vision of grandeur (Your making no sense) gloriously done

  • capt_funguy On Friday, April 23, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    like a darting eyed monologue ... always compelling ... reads like it's all here if you read it right ... very cool ... ( like the blue too ) funguy

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