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By Exodus
You wouldn’t try
And I waited in the black garden
I waited for death
And so the rains, they kissed me
Somber in the winters grasp
Dying: a delicate array of loneliness
The sweetness decaying inside
I glow. And I burn out with the rest of me.
You took my hand, but pulled away
My whole existence
Of liquid sunshine
Cascading down my face
Turning into tears for you.
I will wait for you.
To come back and take me once again.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, March 31, 2004.
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341)
wrote:
the mark of a true writer, to me, is one who inspires me to do so...with pieces like these, i would never feel a reason to stop writing...gorgeous work...-l-
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Mmm makes me wish someone would write poetry about me! And yet again, it makes me want to start writing again... grrr... stupid overworked-ness. Anyway, awesome poem... I like it a lot, it's more like your original style, but improved.
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A former member wrote:
its more different, who are you waiting for?
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