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Comments by Lydia Jade

"Ouch. This is a suckered punch to the heart for me. Too real and relatable. The insurmountable and the hopelessness "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Sincerity" by Lexicon

"The rhymes do feel a little forced here, bit that can be fine in order to maintain the integrity of the message. Interesting "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Mr. Everything-and-More" by InsipidTouch

"I do admire your way with rhymes. Always a deep message that spirals into difficult decipher metaphors. Make people think lest they become drones"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Big Sister" by dwells

"Well, what can I even say about this. Hard hitting for sure, it is very well thought out. Really enjoyed it though.it deserves the dark label we slap on every poem posted here "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Knights and a Princess" by Dethuntillite

"I do love me some aquatic based metaphors. Beautifully penned."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "For Eric" by Salty Ships

"Wow, this was surprisingly well done. Don't take that the wrong way, it's actually a huge compliment. Thought provoking and we'll written work. Impressed"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Devolution" by Abberant

"The fifth line really struck me for some reason. I can't even really put my finger on why. It was a great visual but a powerful metaphor "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Words in Dirty Hands" by Alchemist

"I actually agree whole heartedly with the comment below me. Well done"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "provoking love" by to love a psycho

"This was beautifully for all its sorrow. It was honestly well written. You have talent :)"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "an ode to unchantment" by manunkind

"It's so much easier to say you are fine than try to express why you are not, knowing someone ele could never fully understand because they have not lived your life. Great write."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Iâ€™m Fine (Iâ€™m Not)" by DeificLightning

"I feel this is a very common situation. The empathetic endlessly building up others but people in general are selfish and do not even recognize the effort put into lifting them up. Very real write"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Why does no one reach out to me?" by RedWolf

"This was particularly painful and familiar. It held my attention to the last letter. Very well done."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "434 cold hearted days. alone." by Exodus

"This feels so heavy and the visual presentation was very effective."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "disorderly- asylum door #7" by anathema

"Can't believe this hasn't been commented one. This was beautifully written and very unique. Lovely"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "in paths set in rigid time (Tuesday, 27 August 1996)" by BetaWolfinVA

"Wow...this really impressed me for whatever that is worth to you. Like the previous commenter said. Vivid....that is the perfect descriptor for this. Truly great write."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Sunset" by Full blame

"I liked the title. It seemed so light and the poem itself so dark. Contrast. Well done."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Dream on, starchild." by Iron Blood Orphan

"What a beautiful wispy feeling write. Sort of willow in nature if that makes any sense. Lovely"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Quiet Wind?" by steuss

"Love the bouncing flow. It is hard.to find a good rhe flow that doesn't feel forced. Well done."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"This has an aged feel to it. Like it should be written on parhement. Love when a poem has that feel."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Aftermath" by Crimson Shade

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