Sunset
By Full blame
The rail
runs through
his fingers
Iron
leads
down a hill
Glaze recesses
like he
is slipping
away
Letting him fall
on green grass
Maximum
colors split on his
insides,
glitter pavement.
Wrapped
around
his spine
his chest
is mine
Artificial,
plasma melt
flat
like gauze
of
film
reality. Adumbrations,
deja-vu prophecy.
Stay.
Rolling, rolling
orange out
of a cobbled road
of beds. Your
grassy tracks, smack of
a burning
suddenly
ceasing
to waste me.
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Copyright 2005 black spot
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, The Crimson Queen
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vividly amazing..
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A former member wrote:
your word seemed woven together like a wicker chair or something very good ~~g.a.p.~~
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, Dolly_Fatale
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Just wow.
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, island warrior
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A very enjoyable read. Perfect flow.
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A former member wrote:
i like your writting style, and i think this piece was written well. ...............................................................................-samone