Sunset

By Full blame

The rail
runs through
his fingers
Iron
leads down a hill
Glaze recesses
like he
is slipping
away


Letting him fall
on green grass
Maximum
colors split on his
insides,
glitter pavement. 
Wrapped around 
his spine
his chest
is mine
 

Artificial, 
plasma melt
flat 
like gauze 
of film
reality. Adumbrations,
deja-vu prophecy.    
Stay. 


Rolling, rolling
orange out
of a cobbled road
of beds. Your
grassy tracks, smack of   
a burning
suddenly ceasing
to waste me.





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Copyright 2005 black spot
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.     Filed under:
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  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, February 11, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    vividly amazing..

  • A former member wrote: your word seemed woven together like a wicker chair or something very good ~~g.a.p.~~

  • Dolly_Fatale On Friday, January 28, 2005, Dolly_Fatale (29)By person wrote:

    Just wow.

  • island warrior On Thursday, January 27, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    A very enjoyable read. Perfect flow.

  • A former member wrote: i like your writting style, and i think this piece was written well. ...............................................................................-samone

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