Playing with The Grim Reaper.

By ImmortalMistress

Whispering shadows floating all around,
Blood splattered glass lay shattered on the ground.

Cold, damp and wet, and so very alone,
Bound and shackled to Death's boned throne.

Demons dancing all over the walls,
Blood curdling screams coming from the haunting halls.

Forgotten and unwanted, and left to die,
No tears left in my eyes for me too cry.

Rusted iron shackles piercing deep in my skin,
I played Death's game, but i didn't win.

He is my master, my keeper and my lover all in one,
There is no point in fighting it, i give up, he has won.

The darkened abyss of his immortal heart,
Has merged into mine so we cannot part.

I am faithfully bound to my immortal keeper,
I am in love with Death, The Grim Reaper.

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Copyright 2010 ImmortalMistress
Published on Sunday, August 29, 2010.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is just a wee short version of a dream i had.when i have time i will extend this poem.
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  • ImmortalMistress On Friday, February 4, 2011, ImmortalMistress (29)By person wrote:

    thank you for your comments. i am glad you liked it. its featured in my book that i am writing so im glad to get good feedback from you. :)

  • A former member wrote: Oh! What a work! At once dark and erotic. I can taste the dust on the floor. I can feel your desire and your despair. I am in awe.

  • ImmortalMistress On Friday, February 4, 2011, ImmortalMistress (29)By person wrote:

    aww thank you. i couldnt reply earlier as my profile wouldnt let me. but thank you for enjoying my poem and commenting :)

  • A former member wrote: Very powerful poem, your imagery is excellent, you have painted a picture with your words. Great work, not even sure if it needs a longer version as you mentioned on the page, as this poem says everything so succinctly.

  • A former member wrote: You put your dream to paper well. Expanded and created a good piece. Much enjoyed. =)

  • ImmortalMistress On Tuesday, September 7, 2010, ImmortalMistress (29)By person wrote:

    thank you for reading my poem and for the comment.:)

  • beautifullybroken On Tuesday, August 31, 2010, beautifullybroken (20)By person wrote:

    Dreams can be so inspiring. Great poem.

  • ImmortalMistress On Wednesday, September 1, 2010, ImmortalMistress (29)By person wrote:

    thank you very much for the nice comment.. :)

  • ImmortalMistress On Monday, August 30, 2010, ImmortalMistress (29)By person wrote:

    such praise from you is always excellent. i hope to extend this piece and do the full dream justice as there is a lot of erotic moments missed out, thank you for the comment friend. x

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