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Playing with The Grim Reaper.
By ImmortalMistress
Whispering shadows floating all around,
Blood splattered
glass lay shattered on the ground.
Cold, damp and wet, and so
very alone,
Bound and shackled to Death's boned throne.
Demons
dancing all over the walls,
Blood curdling screams coming from the
haunting halls.
Forgotten and unwanted, and left to die,
No tears left in my eyes for me too cry.
Rusted iron shackles
piercing deep in my skin,
I played Death's game, but i didn't win.
He is my master, my keeper and my lover all in one,
There
is no point in fighting it, i give up, he has won.
The darkened
abyss of his immortal heart,
Has merged into mine so we cannot part.
I am faithfully bound to my immortal keeper,
I am in love
with Death, The Grim Reaper.
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Copyright 2010 ImmortalMistress
Author's Note:
This is just a wee short version of a dream i had.when i have time i will extend this poem.Awards
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On Friday, February 4, 2011, ImmortalMistress
(29)
wrote:
thank you for your comments. i am glad you liked it. its featured in my book that i am writing so im glad to get good feedback from you. :)
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A former member wrote:
Oh! What a work! At once dark and erotic. I can taste the dust on the floor. I can feel your desire and your despair. I am in awe.
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On Friday, February 4, 2011, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
aww thank you. i couldnt reply earlier as my profile wouldnt let me. but thank you for enjoying my poem and commenting :)
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A former member wrote:
Very powerful poem, your imagery is excellent, you have painted a picture with your words. Great work, not even sure if it needs a longer version as you mentioned on the page, as this poem says everything so succinctly.
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A former member wrote:
You put your dream to paper well. Expanded and created a good piece. Much enjoyed. =)
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2010, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
thank you for reading my poem and for the comment.:)
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2010, beautifullybroken
(20) wrote:
Dreams can be so inspiring. Great poem.
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2010, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
thank you very much for the nice comment.. :)
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On Monday, August 30, 2010, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
such praise from you is always excellent. i hope to extend this piece and do the full dream justice as there is a lot of erotic moments missed out, thank you for the comment friend. x
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