The Quiet Wind?
By steuss
Quiet wind, and a sleepy leave rustly,
grasses weave, and tangle in dance.
Quiet wind?
O' symphony of the midnight,
the apex of the moon.
Crushing boots, with trails in the sea,
stop suddenly in the midst of stars,
to gaze at pinholes of the sky.
O' conductor lord, twich your eye,
the music must go on!
Sleepping light, you're the orator of the night
the dance has ended, and failling,
Finished waltz?
O' magister of the shadow, flick your wrist,
the spears must weave in Song!
Whipered order, travel lightly from the lord,
string instruments, and test the drums,
Music once again?
O' creator of the orchastra, continue your performance,
the sun is long in coming!
Quiet wind? No, a pause in the act,
a shift in the corperal loom,
Music of the Dance.
O' symphony of midnight,
the dance of shadow,
the dance of moons,
the dance of the night,
continues on till dawn...
Comments on "The Quiet Wind?"
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A former member wrote:
very well written , i loved it, the ending was beautiful!!!!!
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A former member wrote:
Very good wordage
this poem brings joy to my world
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful, love. "Quiet wind, and a sleepy leave rustly, grasses weave, and tangle in dance." That first stanza is so inviting; Calm and whimsical. And as for the last; such a mesmeric closure. A dream to read.
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
this is beautiful...the ending is just magnificent...miraculous through + through. i thoroughly enjoyed this.