the 1, 4, 5 progression

By shortandpretentious

the comedic catastrophe is
she’s constructed a
castle comprised of
counterfeit compassion
casually causing casualties

im convinced
she can’t operate
without hurting someone
I can’t function
without first making sure that she’s watching
I don’t even know what it is

like inspiration
not that she inspires me
but that I only have her at certain times
(although I look for her everywhere)

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Published on Sunday, April 25, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "the 1, 4, 5 progression"

On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Have to agree with ol' Solace below...I too am enthralled by your refreshingly unique style. I think we've all known someone like the girl you describe, a girl who allows herself to be a crutch but yet does more damage than good. Fan-bloomin'-tastic!
On Monday, January 9, 2006, AHHH (184) wrote:

nice.
On Monday, April 4, 2005, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

i agree with solace.......it brings forth fast intelligence.........well done urban
On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Solace (1065) wrote:

Your style is strange, fresh, something I've not seen in a long while...I'm becoming enthralled by what i see...
On Thursday, August 26, 2004, steuss (92) wrote:

WOW! this is GREAT WORK! I really like the alliteration in the first stanza, and the whole poem flows so wonderfully together! MMMM, this is great!
On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384) wrote:

wow ~ss