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the 1, 4, 5 progression
By shortandpretentious
the comedic catastrophe is
she’s constructed a
castle comprised of
counterfeit compassion
casually causing casualties
im convinced
she can’t operate
without hurting someone
I can’t function
without first making sure that she’s watching
I don’t even know what it is
like inspiration
not that she inspires me
but that I only have her at certain times
(although I look for her everywhere)
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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Sunday, April 25, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Have to agree with ol' Solace below...I too am enthralled by your refreshingly unique style. I think we've all known someone like the girl you describe, a girl who allows herself to be a crutch but yet does more damage than good. Fan-bloomin'-tastic!
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, AHHH
(187) wrote:
nice.
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On Monday, April 4, 2005, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
i agree with solace.......it brings forth fast intelligence.........well done urban
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Your style is strange, fresh, something I've not seen in a long while...I'm becoming enthralled by what i see...
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On Thursday, August 26, 2004, steuss
(92) wrote:
WOW! this is GREAT WORK! I really like the alliteration in the first stanza, and the whole poem flows so wonderfully together! MMMM, this is great!
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
wow ~ss
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