Comments by All Members
- ""If my feet could walk as fast as my heart is beating"
Very clever line. Powerful read to say the least. "
Posted by Michael on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
- "I've got to be honest here. .. I skimmed through this one. I tried at first but it just keeps getting worse and worse. The imagery I mean, of course. I'm sure it's brilliant just like all the others."
Posted by Cantara on "Lust for the Dead" by SilentStalker
- "Brilliaaant! You held every line together with cohesive consistency right down to the very last. An exciting and yet even pace. You didn't skip a beat. I read this with delight and ease and of course much interest.!"
Posted by Cantara on "Stalker" by SilentStalker
- "Very sweet and sad poem. I hope she can see as you do. Its very sad to know so many people feel worthless. Regardless if you believe in a God who made you, if you evolved without a creator, or if you were a lucky turtle in the ocean coming up through a single tube (a Buddhist metaphor) everyone is needed. Everyone can make a co tribution that only they can make. Its ironic that a person will Searcy through hand pressed shirts each slightly different and feel amazing that it's one in a thousand when they feel nothing that they are one in billions."
Posted by Unknown on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "I thought that was an very detailed poem telling how it feels to lose someone you care for and loved very dearly "
Posted by Unknown on "Buried" by SilentStalker
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