Comments by All Members
- "wow, how did i not comment on this in november... loved it, and inspired me to write http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/work/170254... amazing what tricks you learn over time..."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- "I am sorry to hear that Natalie. I'm glad you found this poem but i hope it didn't make a hurtful situation more painful. Stay strong lady friend. "
Posted by Dei on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "i opened this poem to read as a distraction...and it made me feel too much, cause a friend of mine just called in tears...someone she knows...knew...just committed suicide while on the phone to her. these words sear at my emotions....tragic"
Posted by natalie on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "This is great the way it is in my opinion but can't wait to see the rest of it! Nicely done!"
Posted by Unknown on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "This is so sad. The torment of it seems to have brushed its way beautifully across the paper, though. I'm glad I clicked on this, your words are stark gems."
Posted by Unknown on "Scent." by Dei
- "Some works may progress only within the mind; Some may never and just wither and die. Concedeing is just the predecessor to moving on, in my humble opinion.Good stuff.."
Posted by Skye on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "Your use of imagery shows how beautiful your words are...I wish I could describe visions in such detail...keep up the great work"
Posted by Ravenblade on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
- "Giving-in and giving up are two concepts: one a temporary state, and the other permanent. Sounds here like you have made that progression, keep fighting lady!"
Posted by dwells on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "I liked the way the words flowed I think though it would be nice to be longer I felt like it was to describe part of a story how someone would feel when one spoke to them in such a venomous way
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Posted by Unknown on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "so full of painful emotion in this one. yet, it was still very beautiful with the way you word things. "
Posted by Star on "Scent." by Dei
- "breathtakingly beautiful. i love it when i read a poem that speaks to me like another poem didn't before. i'm in utterly awe. 10/10 :) "
Posted by Star on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "i submitted this for the Golden Ratio contest here on DP and won. It was very fun for me. This is on of my favorites. :)"
Posted by Dei on "Phi." by Dei
- "I like your letters picture!
Also you have recognized that you not only create some imaginations & fantasies of different interpretations w/ in of lines, words & letters ... There are also other opportunities, through fragments to "draw" & to create reflections & phantoms of the imagination for the people w/ in the people ... for the readers w/ in the readers ...
There are 5 lines in your superb work, which I like best:
- "The mirrored images of far off galaxies in the flowers you crushed"
- "Tides because the mermaids did not answer."
- "Feel as an old memory of the"
- "Strangers we used to be."
&
- "Let's clasp wrists tight"
Absolutely beautiful & expressive!
Well done! You can definitely be proud of yourself!
I'd quite like to know if you have won the award w/ this poem! ? Yes or no?
I'm still new here ... & therefore, I don't know anything how the individual pages of this website are built ..."
Posted by metaphormachine on "Phi." by Dei
- "i like all three stanzas for how they each present themselves with different images, yet are joined together so artfully...very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "though you are right, every line of this poem was written for a specific person so there are pages and pages of "inside jokes" and text wrapped up in these simple lines of poetry"
Posted by Dei on "Adayr." by Dei
- "it's a reference to Sir Isaac Newton. Who developed the theory of "Gravity" allegedly by having an apple fall from a tree and hit him on the head. As children we would hold our tongues in between our fingers and say "apple" and giggle over the way it sounded like "asshole". "Holding the tongue" is also a way of implying being non verbal. SO im also expressing the way that he and i dont require literal speech in order to understand each other. "
Posted by Dei on "Adayr." by Dei
- "This was read very tenderly, I saw hikes trails and ear to ear smiles. I wish I understood the quote, but its above me! Maybe its because I am the reader, and its one of those "you had to be there." moments."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Adayr." by Dei
- "This is painfully beautiful... nicely penned!"
Posted by Unknown on "Scent." by Dei
- "the magic in it is easy to feel... makes a person smile no matter where they are in their own thoughts."
Posted by Unknown on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "heartbreaking and gorgeous at the same time... it dances like spinning maple seeds... elegant and aching... stunning... simply stunning piece"
Posted by NikesRain on "Some Sort of Lovely (revised)" by Dei
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