Char. -Haiku

By Dei

I was spitting fire
Unaware you had changed clothes
And wore gasoline

The fire melted skin
Your aura boiled brilliantly
Leaving pretty bones

Ashes filled my nose
The chip from your shoulder, a
Diamond in the dust

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Published on Wednesday, November 7, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Char. -Haiku"

A former member wrote: i like all three stanzas for how they each present themselves with different images, yet are joined together so artfully...very well done.
A former member wrote: I like the ideas in this...especially "your aura burnt brilliantly / leaving pretty bones". The first haiku/stanza was my favorite. Neat work!
On Sunday, November 18, 2012, Oliver Twisted (53) wrote:

I love the first two. Gimme danger/little stranger
On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, Alchemist (679) wrote:

The first 2 are very pretty bones of poetry.
On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

This is beautiful.
On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Sounds like a bad way to go, but at least you got the diamond! Cheers AD.