Char. -Haiku

By Dei

I was spitting fire
Unaware you had changed clothes
And wore gasoline



The fire melted skin
Your aura boiled brilliantly
Leaving pretty bones



Ashes filled my nose
The chip from your shoulder, a
Diamond in the dust
 

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Copyright 2012 Nefarious
Published on Wednesday, November 7, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i like all three stanzas for how they each present themselves with different images, yet are joined together so artfully...very well done.

  • A former member wrote: I like the ideas in this...especially "your aura burnt brilliantly / leaving pretty bones". The first haiku/stanza was my favorite. Neat work!

  • Oliver Twisted On Sunday, November 18, 2012, Oliver Twisted (55)By person wrote:

    I love the first two. Gimme danger/little stranger

  • Alchemist On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    The first 2 are very pretty bones of poetry.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful.

  • dwells On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Sounds like a bad way to go, but at least you got the diamond! Cheers AD.

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