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Scent.
By Dei
Phero.moans causing fleeting fantasies
Bringing me to knee.
Choking on memory.
I'm praying you'll touch me with those eyes again someday.
And the sweat from my palms soak the silk of your thong
As it rests between my shaking hands
And this...
...This is the way I die.
With the scent of my own nervous perversions leaking from my guilt clogged
pores
Saturating into the fabrics you left (still warm)
Stapled to the letter hanging from the door
Saying simply, "Goodbye." and signed, "I hope you die."
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Copyright 2012 Nefarious
Published on Wednesday, November 7, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Scent."
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A former member wrote:
This is so sad. The torment of it seems to have brushed its way beautifully across the paper, though. I'm glad I clicked on this, your words are stark gems.
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On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Star
(879)
wrote:
so full of painful emotion in this one. yet, it was still very beautiful with the way you word things.
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A former member wrote:
This is painfully beautiful... nicely penned!
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Your pain is echoed in the corridors of my soul.
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A former member wrote:
powerful, and powerfully leaving me longingly wanting to embrace thee, a hug that fits most comfortably.
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A former member wrote:
now if that wasn't intense and in your face at the conclusion....unexpected to say the least....this is a bittersweet picture you painted using slightly molded pastels on a chipper canvas.....thanks...-s_o
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A former member wrote:
the harsh ending is like a brick wall... very well thought out. great write...
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...this is profound. so many scenarios can be conjured up to shed light on the composing of such a malicious farewell letter...
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On Wednesday, November 7, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Sounds like that one's irretrievably broken probably. Most profoundly postulated and the longing is palpable - and who's to decorate a perceived perversion with descriptive adjectives anyway? Cheers!
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