Comments by All Members
- "Sounds like the original picture was nearly destroyed. Maybe my 4 step program will work for you. 1- Close your eyes (no peeking!), 2- Memorize the current shape of each piece, 3- (seriously, no peeking now) Envision each of the pieces as you carefully fit them together, 4- Open your eyes and admire the wonderful NEW picture you have created!! Viola, puzzle solved. Glad to see ya back with us miss Caitlin! Enjoyed reading you again..."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Wild Turkey 101
over ice from a frozen love
First glass , then make it two
Go write a poem or two
But at the bottom of every glass
I see you looking back , kicking ass
Oh well if it's my personal hell
Tell me I do it well"
Posted by midnights voice on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "At least the darkness is all embracing , non judgemental , accepting . The storms of life bring fresh cool winds of enviable change .Disdain for what is knowing there must be better ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "the entirety of irreplaceable life... devours incessantly... such is the addiction of the parasite, maybe... a dependence, one can only wish for a mutuality, unattainable such equilibrium may be... the reciprocity of an unspeakable symbiosis, maybe. thanks for the comments, intriguing words :)
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Posted by The Dybbuk on "Unspeakable" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Heh... An unexpected ending... And that's why I find morals and Ideals a waste of my time, as long as I don't hurt anyone, I don't need to be limiting myself. A thought provoking write!"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Reflection" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Very alluring and enticing, one wants to dive in there with you, or rather to go into such a room, within darkness, within the most sinister, but which also seems the most rebellious. Nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Aaahhhh, the fear, the thrill of the hunt! I absolutely loved you using insanity as the monster....very nicely done!! The flow was captivating and easy to follow, it unfolded beautifully, loved it! Your rhyme scheme was WONDERFUL. They say there's two sides to every story. Here's how to break it down. Read the 1st and 3rd lines, then the 2nd and 4th lines of each paragraph. Voila! two stories become one. The secret lies in the intertwining.......Excellent job, I love this writing style. YOU, my dear, are truly talented!!! (That's what I got from it.....)"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "the thorns keep us alive, they remind us pain is real and in this case they take the pain from tormenting demons from infesting our dreams or nightmares. real or not, theres no easy way out. but i loved your poem, and if you rearranged some words here and there, this poem would really kick ass and flow nicely. awesome caitlinryen!"
Posted by haunted on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium
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