Puzzle Without A Picture

By Intoxicating Delirium

Soul ruptured, mangled
No cracks in sight
 
A path to nowhere
All answers ignite
 
Happiness evanescent
Memories decimated
 
Disorienting perplexity
Integrity desecrated  
 
Impervious melancholy
A desperate resurrection
 
My exuberant soul
Dead with no recollection…
 
How do you reassemble
A puzzle without a picture?

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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Published on Tuesday, October 15, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DestinysDevil On Friday, July 4, 2014, DestinysDevil (5)By person wrote:

    Love the name, it captured my attention right away. And the thoughts that linger even after re reading the poem finding myself in a trance so to speak.. Contemplating the depth at wich this poem partakes. Awesome!

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 2, 2014, FadedBlues (2291)By person wrote:

    ...lost memories & despair. such a portrait of bleakness...

  • A former member wrote: very clever and a joy to read!

  • A former member wrote: Wow...!!!!!!!!!

  • darkheartmagic On Wednesday, December 4, 2013, darkheartmagic (87)By person wrote:

    this is a really good write I enjoyed every line brilliant.

  • A former member wrote: A thought provoking write... my answer would be to make the pieces fit, by smashing them together however I see fit... then paint the world I want over the mess that was...

  • A former member wrote: this is a really elegant piece. good work. :)

  • Sketso On Tuesday, October 22, 2013, Sketso (438)By person wrote:

    A smack in the face... yes, that's the stark harshness of the last two lines. What a unique way to attack the thought held there, in those lines. Pieces... pieces... pieces... almost there. SMACK. Well played. Very well indeed.

  • A former member wrote: I love the ending lines very original, I think we all feel lost like this sometimes. This was really a write worth reading.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (304)By person wrote:

    Thank you everyone, for the wonderful comments :)

  • Scorpio999 On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Scorpio999 (53)By person wrote:

    .. with a hearty laughter ... now then .. where is my peacock feather ..

  • recluse On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, recluse (21)By person wrote:

    powerful. piece no sure way of reassembling the.puzzle if you ask me

  • Peyton1 On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, Peyton1 (184)By person wrote:

    Sounds like the original picture was nearly destroyed. Maybe my 4 step program will work for you. 1- Close your eyes (no peeking!), 2- Memorize the current shape of each piece, 3- (seriously, no peeking now) Envision each of the pieces as you carefully fit them together, 4- Open your eyes and admire the wonderful NEW picture you have created!! Viola, puzzle solved. Glad to see ya back with us miss Caitlin! Enjoyed reading you again...

  • blue angel On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, blue angel (911)By person wrote:

    This has a deafening truth within it, when all the pieces do come together again it's truly art :)~ Well done*

  • haunted On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, haunted (970)By person wrote:

    this is really awesome, very smooth flow and loved the metaphors. this poem is just as good as your beautiful eyebrows. lol...hmm, maybe. haha I enjoyed this thoroughly caitlinryen.

  • dwells On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, dwells (4557)By person wrote:

    One piece at a time I'd guess, and don't lose any of the pieces! Wonderful metaphor and so good to see you back again, cheers!

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