Broken Heart

By Intoxicating Delirium

I turned around and closed my eyes
I refuse to let him see me cry

He can not make me turn around, I implore
I feel him coming near me, slowly creeping

Than I swiftly made my way to the door.
I walked away and will not look back to where I was before

A broken heart forevermore

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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Published on Tuesday, February 12, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This was an english assignment while readint he raven. I like how it turned out so I'll share.
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  • darkheartmagic On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    A broken heart is a terrible thing to wast, after all it was your tears he forced you to tast

  • Syncretism On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Syncretism (35)By person wrote:

    Beautiful! Thank you for writing this! :)

  • A former member wrote: Short with an intense meaning. This poem is very well spoken, I can relate to the heartache of being hurt.

  • Commander_Cadaver On Friday, January 24, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (245)By person wrote:

    Broken hearts suck. Nice write.

  • A former member wrote: I loved this...perfect. You´re perfect...love it! ANd I know all about broken hearts.

  • A former member wrote: I can feel your emotions here thank you for sharing this

  • darkheartmagic On Sunday, August 4, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    short yet means so much great poem and nicely penned.

  • MirrorEye On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, MirrorEye (23)By person wrote:

    Quite a nice poem. Short, but sweet, powerful too

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Thank you :)

  • A former member wrote: It sounds like it was wayyy more than the assignment it sounds like actual words of experience. you did an amazing job!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    this feels like slightly more than an english assignment... well done Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    pardon... i should have asterixed the *slightly* to indicate intentional understatement Scholar

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