Broken Heart
By Intoxicating Delirium
I turned around and closed my eyes
I refuse to let him see me cry
He can not make me turn around, I implore
I feel him coming
near me, slowly creeping
Than I swiftly made my way to the door.
I walked away and will not look back to where I was before
A broken heart forevermore
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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Author's Note:
This was an english assignment while readint he raven. I like how it turned out so I'll share.Awards
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On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
A broken heart is a terrible thing to wast, after all it was your tears he forced you to tast
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On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Syncretism
(34) wrote:
Beautiful! Thank you for writing this! :)
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A former member wrote:
Short with an intense meaning. This poem is very well spoken, I can relate to the heartache of being hurt.
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On Friday, January 24, 2014, Commander_Cadaver
(233) wrote:
Broken hearts suck. Nice write.
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A former member wrote:
I loved this...perfect. You´re perfect...love it! ANd I know all about broken hearts.
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A former member wrote:
I can feel your emotions here thank you for sharing this
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On Sunday, August 4, 2013, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
short yet means so much great poem and nicely penned.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, MirrorEye
(23) wrote:
Quite a nice poem. Short, but sweet, powerful too
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Thank you :)
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A former member wrote:
It sounds like it was wayyy more than the assignment it sounds like actual words of experience. you did an amazing job!
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
this feels like slightly more than an english assignment... well done
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
pardon... i should have asterixed the *slightly* to indicate intentional understatement