Dreams
By Intoxicating Delirium
They were so close
Inseperable they seemed at the most
Then
one day she pushed him away
Harder and harder untill they didn't speak
on any day
Now he is gone forever it seems
But she's wrong,
he is with her in her dreams
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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Author's Note:
It's a short one.Comments on "Dreams"
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On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
Something that can't can't be stopped....dreams. In very few words I loved this work
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A former member wrote:
good write :)
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On Tuesday, October 22, 2013, Scorpio999
(52) wrote:
ahhhh ... ouch .. hurts so goood .. love it .. naturally ..
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On Sunday, August 25, 2013, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
well penned my friend
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A former member wrote:
extremely dolorous.. enjoyed it.. the connection between dreams and reality is nicely defined..thanks for sharing..
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A former member wrote:
Short and Sweet, Right to the point. And how true are these words spoken, even months later, they come to us in our dreams. Great work :)
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A former member wrote:
It's short...
But carries such a deep message which just implants itself in your head, it's very good.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Thank you :)