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- "carved flowers with sycamore.stems.
but they outgrew the size of her garden...
so she pruned the bases away.
I love, I love, I love. "
Posted by Lynaes on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "Darun, I can't understand how I stay away from this site as long as I do sometimes. It's poetry like this that make me glad to be back. You have an extraordinary way with words and thoughts...simply amazing"
Posted by Ravenblade on "C" by SilentStalker
- "what struck me and compelled me to comment is that these words can be followed down several different paths and through several different layers from the specific subject of the poem to one's relationship with the natural world. complexity contained in the apparently uncomplicated."
Posted by Jonas on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "Hm, okay ... well, to write a poem about to killing one spider, a living creature ... is once something completely different ...
But naturally is it a matter of your own opinion if you find it good, funny or meaningful ...
For many women, you seem to be a hero.
For that ... & for writing the poem of the day ... maybe it could motivating you twice, at least, might you think so, & this motivates me also to a basic comment ... & humor can surely help.
Despite everything, you seem to have something done right ...
Cheers for your poem & thanks for a new idea."
Posted by metaphormachine on "Kill the spider" by SilentStalker
- "I had a big smile on my face reading this. It was funny! I am going to post my one about Boris my awesome fly arching shelf spider, who knows best to stay hidden lol. "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Kill the spider" by SilentStalker
- "
oh darun this is beautiful in every way possible, i guess you could say it was per.fection (:
"
Posted by Star on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "I really liked the way you wove this together, the premeditation here is unlike a lot of your earlier works; I mean, the thought you put into this is evident and tenderly rendered. Nicely done, man. and for a worthy person, indeed. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "Thank you Darun. This was a kindness. Truly. No one's ever said anything so sweet or soft. :) I owe you one. "
Posted by Dei on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "This piece is incredibly beautiful...the title says it all. Isn't it amazing how we can all see/feel/believe in the same things, yet for each of us perception can be vastly different?"
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "This is so beautiful and tender. I love the use of ellipsis to create pauses. It made me read it aloud to hear how it played out and it made it much more dynamic in my opinion."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
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