Comments by All Members
- "thank you! i felt terriblly girly while writing it..and hated it the first few times i read back over it..but it floored the person it was for..so it was worth it. ~ash"
Posted by ashrain on "This is what I wanted..." by ashrain
- "Oh man..."better safe from you, than sorry I ever met you." I know all of this...you have portrayed it so very beautifully...I applaud this. Wonderful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "my refusal" by ashrain
- "well ive been there before. And yes, just let it out, emotions kept inside, are never a good thing. But the poem is great... so powerful. I really do like this one. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "we see eye to eye" by ashrain
- "wow....i dont kno what to say...how did you do this? its excellent...i cant even describe how hard my hearts pounding...damn...excellent write...-Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "The Destroyer" by ashrain
- "We bore your mistakes to the grave
We wore the faces of the ghosts
We are the childer of the refusable
We worshiped you as the gods
- this isinsanly awsome! It stays centered well on the main concept, impressive for such a long piece"
Posted by Dei on "Featured Generation" by ashrain
- "scream god damn it and let it out.. we all need to once in awhile. some when there all alone on a deserted road or when they come during sex. Who cares just get it out.."
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "we see eye to eye" by ashrain
- ""We whisper with the wind
praying we arent heard
by each others ears. " oh my goodness...that was the line of the lines. the voices above the voices. incredible wording. i cant relate...the wind will catch my voice and forsake me. beautiful./"
Posted by Twilight on "Loving In Denile" by ashrain
- "the pain is absolutely tangible in this, and the ending is...quietly hard-hitting... excellent write, subtly yet powerfully expressed."
Posted by purr_verse on "my deepest apologies" by ashrain
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