Some People....

By ashrain

Some people make you wish you were a slut.
Some make you want to claw your eyes out.
Some make you wretch.
Some make you cry.
Some cause you pain.
Some joy.
But me....I like the ones made of glass.
The cold, cool, smooth, suave mutherfuckers.
Invade and destroy me.

(t:PM)

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Copyright 2004 ashrain
Published on Friday, January 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, September 14, 2007, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    ooh, bites you with thoes last three lines. :)

  • A former member wrote: Just.. ~Lost

  • nell On Saturday, March 20, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    wicked imagery, this is a really good write=)

  • Methos On Friday, January 9, 2004, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    Very intense for so short a poem..short, but with so much meaning and depth..wonderful write...-Methos

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Friday, January 2, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    You go girl...I couldn't agree more......"Ivade and destroy me" Great line!!!!

  • Drea On Friday, January 2, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    the last 3 lines had me smiling. i dont know why. this is a good write. i must read more ~Drea~

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