Comments by All Members
- "i hope your dream came true...hurts too much to be separated from a love you deem to be 'the one'."
Posted by natalie on "Our Dream" by BrokenAngel
- "This felt stark like waiting to decay with only that to look forward to. I think a lot of people can metaphorically relate to this. "
Posted by Dilated View on "she sits..." by BrokenAngel
- "isn't that the sad truth? we live and give of ourselves only to be forgotten when death steals us away. simple wording that painted visuals that will be remembered."
Posted by natalie on "the cemetery" by BrokenAngel
- "this is simply .... beautiful.
a vivid, likeness of its owner.
pat yourself on the back.. excellent write.
simply, yet deeply gratifying."
Posted by natalie on "life is a blank page" by BrokenAngel
- "the rubber room is cold and frozen in time .... odd they still actually use it . good write , i enjoyed this piece , thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "she sits..." by BrokenAngel
- "Sucks to love and never be loved , i feel your imagery and have lived it so many times , great write thanks for the memory ...."
Posted by Unknown on "why cant you see it" by BrokenAngel
- "this is a heall of a piece..pain and rage redefined..liked your way of expression..irony in the poem is also gud..rate u 9/10...1 mark for a bit less combination of words...else its perfect"
Posted by Unknown on "REVENGE" by BrokenAngel
- "Because as much as not having someone is hard and sucks, having someone ignore the most sacred part of yourself is so much worse. I hope whoever it is opens their eyes."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "why cant you see it" by BrokenAngel
- "you have some good imagery and I agree that this would sink its claws into the readers mind a bit more if you changed your structure a good bit. However unlike the others I think you should try it not to please the reader but to try something different even if you don't do it again.
It's all about the challenge :P
Great work and am going to read more now lol."
Posted by nightshade on "in the darkness of the night" by BrokenAngel
- "It's always the way! you give your heart to someone and they tear it to shreds but you still want them back..at least for a short while... It takes time but you get over them eventually. good read "
Posted by johnbevan17 on "why cant you see it" by BrokenAngel
- "You just made my Favorites list. That is so plainly true and devastating, it hurts to read it. I do believe that shared true love is the only exception to this, and perhaps the love of a good parent, but other than those exceptions, there is no one else that I can see. Thanks for the insight."
Posted by Scarrzz on "the truth" by BrokenAngel
- "is that revenge sex in the third haiku? interesting way of enacting revenge.... the sequence tells a tale... there seems to be a seediness to the snow fall here.... maybe.... well written! "
Posted by Unknown on "haikus" by BrokenAngel
- "This is so sweet and such a nice break from 'darker' poetry. You really captured this moment perfectly. "
Posted by Unknown on "My Love Life" by BrokenAngel
- "Holy cow. Touching and poignant. Like you were observing yourself from the future. I wish i could truly tell you how much I like this. My simple words seem to not be enough to do it justice. Please know that this was truly a remarkable piece though, in my humble opinion. --Draven"
Posted by Unknown on "life is a blank page" by BrokenAngel
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