the flowers

By BrokenAngel

he loves me
he loves me not...

silly foolish childrens game.

i beg the flower
hoping...
hoping...
hoping...

that you love me.

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© 2008 BrokenAngel
Published on Wednesday, October 8, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, October 24, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    I like it. Deceptively simple, great yearning beneath the surface. :) -Carl

  • Leith Plunkett On Thursday, October 16, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    I dont know how I missed reading this. Such a simple concept that screams desperate love. If only love was that simple :-)

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