you knew better

By BrokenAngel

sob, you S.O.B.
cry your fucking eyes out.
see if i care.
yeah...
you love me.
so what?

you knew better
than to give your heart away,
to a monster.

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© 2009 BrokenAngel
Published on Wednesday, May 13, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ashteroth On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    Agree totally to the "warning label on cd thing" lol.I guess sometimes it's just easier to admit you don't care then to realise deep inside you somehow do hey?

  • CjPsychotic On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, CjPsychotic (30)By person wrote:

    I can picture this as one of those warning labels like you find on a cd. I loved the beginning "sob, you S.O.B"...I think that's what did it for me.

  • A former member wrote: Even when the signs are painfully obvious, it won't stop those of us who are obviously just gluttons for punishment and just don't know how to love normal, sane people. Very nice.

  • A former member wrote: a dis.claimer of love: if you give me your heart i will hide it under the bed and eat it at my leisure...can't blame a monster for being a monster! I like the tone behind this...no breathing room to argue.

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