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why cant you see it
By BrokenAngel
oh darling
why cant you see
im completely in love
with you.
your burning eyes
possessive touch
and dominating smell
drive me wild
your so far
from me
im alone
without your embrace
make love to me
take what is yours
my heart and body
desire you
come back to me
i crave
you
oh darling
i love you
cant you see?
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Copyright 2010 BrokenAngel
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A former member wrote:
i've been there and it never ends well. O_O
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A former member wrote:
Sucks to love and never be loved , i feel your imagery and have lived it so many times , great write thanks for the memory ....
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A former member wrote:
real nyc 8/10..rated!!
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On Thursday, September 30, 2010, johnbevan17
(52)
wrote:
It's always the way! you give your heart to someone and they tear it to shreds but you still want them back..at least for a short while... It takes time but you get over them eventually. good read
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