haikus

By BrokenAngel

you say you love me
but i know youre lying
and youll break my heart

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laying in her bed
fantasizing about him
she exhausts herself

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bruises on her face
he takes her into his arms
plotting his revenge

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snow falls quietly
t.v. says 'classes cancelled'
students sleep away

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Published on Thursday, September 23, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "haikus"

A former member wrote: is that revenge sex in the third haiku? interesting way of enacting revenge.... the sequence tells a tale... there seems to be a seediness to the snow fall here.... maybe.... well written!
On Saturday, September 25, 2010, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Fantastic! Smooth haikus with maximum meaning and impact.