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haikus
By BrokenAngel
you say you love me
but i know youre lying
and youll break
my heart
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laying in her bed
fantasizing about him
she exhausts
herself
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bruises on her face
he takes her into his arms
plotting
his revenge
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snow falls quietly
t.v. says 'classes cancelled'
students sleep away
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Copyright 2010 BrokenAngel
Published on Thursday, September 23, 2010.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
is that revenge sex in the third haiku? interesting way of enacting revenge.... the sequence tells a tale... there seems to be a seediness to the snow fall here.... maybe.... well written!
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On Saturday, September 25, 2010, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Fantastic! Smooth haikus with maximum meaning and impact.
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