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"this poem describes a situation i've been through multiple times before, i feel your pain."
Posted by Unknown on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"Goddness... It's always nice to read about pain when you dwell in it's agony, but this poem makes me want to do something about it rather than follow it. I almost want to thank you. Haha. Great poem. "
Posted by Unknown on "i fell hard" by SourInnocence

"What a desolate set of words. Desolate and desperate. Well written."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "why bother titling a normal night of my life." by SourInnocence

"I think you just summed up my first two years of high school in one fantastic piece of work. thank you"
Posted by BrideToAgony on "just let me touch her" by SourInnocence

"This reminds me almost exactly how I felt about a love of mine...this was wonderful. "
Posted by Unknown on "love triangle" by SourInnocence

"The fact that I have seemed to stumble across this piece after what looks like about 8 years gives me even more of a sense of unquiet curiosity about the author. I wonder if you still log in or visit DP? Are you still with the person who may have been the inspiration for this timeless, all to human tragic glimpse of reality? I wonder about a lot of things.... but, I know I like this. --Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "not when i've come so far." by SourInnocence

"I can deeply relate to this. I experienced something similar and the first few lines really captured me, nailed me to the past and let me bleed out more memories. Good work, the more emotion you can invoke in a person the better the art piece is."
Posted by Unknown on "right here where you left me." by SourInnocence

"Sad longing that makes ones heart cry with pain to love and not be able to declare it to the world, nice"
Posted by Ophelia on "just let me touch her" by SourInnocence

"its just how i feel thats why i like it alot!! its like you wrote this for me just kidding keep up the good work"
Posted by forgoten_wolf on "a dream thats love" by SourInnocence

"i can relate. wow! you awoke some memories . i feel your pain. very well done"
Posted by natalie on "sweet dreams" by SourInnocence

"this is a great piece, so keep on writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "take me for granted" by SourInnocence

"Wow, this poem is epic. It happenes to a lot of people. The pain screams from the screen. Good job."
Posted by Unknown on "mommys little actress" by SourInnocence

"very true to life, every time i open myself up to someone i lose them. i can completely feel you through this work, thank you for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "i lost you again" by SourInnocence

"You wrote this emotion very well, its hard to put this kind of thing into words that others might understand and still get the full force of the emotion through. Well read. Jade"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "counting the days untill i'm without you" by SourInnocence

"This is the first of your works I have read. I have been in a similar situation. oh the memories.....thank you for this write"
Posted by Crimsonrose on "right here where you left me." by SourInnocence

"i like this... i can connect with it... i have experienced this kind of issue a few times in my life... great work, kudos for you"
Posted by Unknown on "i lost you again" by SourInnocence

"It's sad and well written. It reminds me of couples in general, when guys say "You look cute/beautiful when you're angry". For some reason people are attracted to others' pain. "
Posted by Child of GOD on "it was me and you, against yourself." by SourInnocence

"Oh how remorse haunts. May it hopefully make one think before they disregard another, open eyes to what one does have and learn to appreciate."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "i lost you again" by SourInnocence

"lol reminds me of my ex-boyfriend at the minute..."
Posted by Unknown on "i lost you again" by SourInnocence

"so sad, and so painfully written. Well done."
Posted by Bluegirl on "mommys little actress" by SourInnocence

"coming across works like this is why i love the random works button. i came across it at the exact right time. and i was really able to connect with it. thank you. *bookmarks*"
Posted by anakronistik_me on "i hate you as much as i hate myself" by SourInnocence

"this is so painfully beautiful. all things end up working out in the end."
Posted by HalfDarkAngel on "mommys little actress" by SourInnocence

"i love the poem..... i have beed in this situatoin before. it hurts.....this poem reached out to me like a sad memory.....it made me cry....but i loved it. i guess it is better to be friends with some one you love then nothing at all......."
Posted by the dried flower on "for the one i love" by SourInnocence

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