sweet dreams
By SourInnocence
Sweet dreams my love, crawl between the warm sheets.
Nuzzle up close to your pillow.
Lie on your side and pretend that I’m there
Never wanting to let go.
Watch the clock as you drift away
Into dreams where I love you.
Dream about the things you’ll never have
And the things you’ll never do.
Toss and turn while the minutes tick by
And your sweet dream sours.
Dream about loving without love in return.
And the tears that fall for hours.
Roll about grasping for someone to hold,
Without finding a loving touch in return.
Dream about all the things that you need,
And about everything you yearn.
Sweet dreams my love, between the warm sheets,
With your face buried deep in the pillow.
Lie on your side and pretend that I’m there
Even though I’ve let go long ago.
Comments on "sweet dreams"
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A former member wrote:
Astonishing work!
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On Friday, February 25, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
very nice intriguing "even though i've let go long ago" the line that makes it lovely -kitty
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
The whole piece is very well put together. Dancing towards the end. And the end ... Well the end was just. I think I will say rare in a way, becouse you seem to nail what many try to in it with ease. Great work.
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A former member wrote:
wow im speachless an awsome writting for sure. keep up the good work
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
I know just how you feel..this is very well written great job