dont let them fix me.

By SourInnocence

If I screamed louder would you hear me any better?
If I screamed longer would you pay attention?
If I beat my fists upon the glass, and cried a tear or to,
Would you realize just how desperate I am?
If I kicked and screamed while they drag me away,
Would you feel pity for me?
What if I just gave up and walked obediently as they escort me out.
Would you regret the damage you’ve done.
Come closer to my padded room so I can see you one more time.
Before they try to fix what you broke.

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Sunday, June 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Feeling this..

  • DoctorAsh On Sunday, June 8, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    heh ... this is cool [i think i know were your trying to go with this piece] and im watching them pick up broken glass shards of you. [Excellent write].[D&A]

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