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insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)
By SourInnocence
Maybe it’s better this way,
Not having to say goodbye.
Just slamming the doors,
And regretting.
I don’t hate you,
But maybe that hurt you enough
to make you feel the same as me.
When you leave me stranded.
It’s such a hassle.
To try to pretend you’re different.
I love you like no other,
And that’s the only reason I hurt.
Because words are cheap,
But cut the deepest.
Things we’ve said tonight cant be unsaid,
And the scars you carved
May never fully heal.
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Copyright 2004 SourInnocence
Published on Tuesday, February 17, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
this poem describes a situation i've been through multiple times before, i feel your pain.
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405)
wrote:
I still have scars to this day, but I have let go and moved on. Looks like you are doing the same. Good work. ..Morb =)
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Cinn
(152) wrote:
this is a great poem its sad but it mean something i really like it
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Drifter
(265) wrote:
This was touching. I agree w/ Angel on the words are cheap part. Nice work.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
I ilke "...Because words are cheap, but cut the deepest" I grab sustenance in these words+Fallen One+
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
*sniff sniff* damn it hurts...beautiful seriously-]darkness[-
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A former member wrote:
i like it! great job
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