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i fell hard
By SourInnocence
I fell and I fell hard
No one can pick me up
Dust me off and send me along.
And that’s all I want
Maybe need.
So I’ll just lie here
In this hole of self-pity
In this face down position
I know too well.
The tears will flood
And I’ll drown
Still waiting.
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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Monday, June 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "i fell hard"
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A former member wrote:
Goddness... It's always nice to read about pain when you dwell in it's agony, but this poem makes me want to do something about it rather than follow it. I almost want to thank you. Haha. Great poem.
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A former member wrote:
wow
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, angel_eyes
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wrote:
this is GREAT! i can really relate--hey i rhymed
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A former member wrote:
no shit...well put. Great poem
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