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not when i've come so far.
By SourInnocence
Make me laugh again,
To forget about these tears.
Take me away for a few hours,
To make my day worth living.
Help me even when I pretend I don’t want it.
No matter how much I need it.
Stand up for me,
When no one else can find the courage to.
Tell me I’m beautiful when I feel ugly,
Even if I don’t believe you.
Let me be strong for you,
Even if you don’t need me to.
Don’t leave me like all the others.
They never meant as much as you.
And when our late night talks fall upon what if’s
And you ask where I’d be without you.
I don’t know if I’d even be at all.
So don’t lose me now,
When I’ve come so far.
Just make me laugh again.
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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Tuesday, August 26, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "not when i've come so far."
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A former member wrote:
The fact that I have seemed to stumble across this piece after what looks like about 8 years gives me even more of a sense of unquiet curiosity about the author. I wonder if you still log in or visit DP? Are you still with the person who may have been the inspiration for this timeless, all to human tragic glimpse of reality? I wonder about a lot of things.... but, I know I like this. --Draven.
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
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wrote:
"And when our late night talks fall upon what if’s And you ask where I’d be without you. I don’t know if I’d even be at all.". . great line, really nice piece. . an almost sadly pathetic need to feel that lover, a feeling i know very well. .
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On Tuesday, August 26, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
i can feel this thouroughly... words are comfort, and silence only makes life more unbearable then it has to be, well displayed and good job, nice write *~*aNDReW*~*
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