a dream thats love

By SourInnocence

A dream
a want,
a longing,
a need.
Heartbroken
rejected,
alone I bleed.
Loneliness,
Boredom,
insanities spread.
Fantasy and reality blur in my head.
Love,
compassion,
companionship,
bliss.
Too broken to love. I’ll never know this.
Ignored,
disturbed,
perverted,
corrupted.
Life long goals never reached, interrupted.
Torn,
shattered,
broken in pieces.
Looking for some fun. Some releases.
Nothing,
unimportant,
minute,
shit.
I gave up trying,
but now I quit.

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Sunday, May 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • forgoten_wolf On Tuesday, July 6, 2010, forgoten_wolf (11)By person wrote:

    its just how i feel thats why i like it alot!! its like you wrote this for me just kidding keep up the good work

  • A former member wrote: This is one of my favorite poems I have ever read. Excellent job.

  • A former member wrote: Nicely done!!!!

  • A former member wrote: really great work... *Dark Angel*

  • A former member wrote: Sounds like depression... They have pills for that, but the type you'd require would annihilate your reproductive drive...

  • SourInnocence On Monday, May 19, 2003, SourInnocence (13)By person wrote:

    well your rude, if you would have read my information you'd see i write fiction. not everything i write is how i feel. try to write as someone else, maybe you'd be a good person.

  • A former member wrote: thats really kool how it all kinda goes together..great job .... shadow

  • Griffin On Sunday, May 18, 2003, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    wow, really nice. great work

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