Comments by All Members
- "this leaves me felling barren and bereft...you capture so much feeling in your words it is nothing short of amazing ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Lucero" by Stranger
- "The content of this was incredible; the presentation clear enough to do it justice. And I would not be doing it justice if I didn't make it a favorite. Very nice work."
Posted by stormtalk on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "ooops...existence.
also i might add...this is well done. reminds me of how thankful i am to be a woman, and to be loved by one as well"
Posted by AniDayz on "Woman" by Stranger
- "and had there been no intelligence to this piece, id have been a bit insulted, mortified [maybe?]but you add intricate metaphors and paint the portrayl of human esitence...grasp the differences between a man and a woman"
Posted by AniDayz on "Woman" by Stranger
- "w/out your footnote, i think i would have gathered the same from this poem as i did w/ it. it is intelligently done with a force of energy"
Posted by AniDayz on "Woman" by Stranger
- "~I am a book without a spine Blowing naked in a storm~ what a painful write, full of desolation and dispair conveyed brilliantly ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "Remonstrance" by Stranger
- "I had been conquered and enraptured, destroyed and renewed, rent in fragments and made whole, freed and enslaved, broken and created..beautiful write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Perfect Slave" by Stranger
- "i can relate to this so much..thank you for sharing it ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Master" by Stranger
- "brilliant. incredibly brilliant. to take harsh words and twist them to mean something different. I love the message as well."
Posted by JustBnMe on "Woman" by Stranger
- "this was amazing, insightful,and profound. i am left in awe ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Woman" by Stranger
- "i really like this. by using the bible in your poem, it creates even more sensuality. i never thought i'd use those 2 words togther- bible and sensual..."
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
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