Remembering the Future

By Stranger

These thoughts of you
Pulsing through my mind
Relentless temptations
To return
A hornets stinger
Pumping poison
Barbs digging deeper
Long after its death
A woman trying to coax
The poison out
With her lips
Is stung as well
I make a clumsy attempt with
An ornamental knife
At a physician's craft
I turn my eyes away
I stab blindly at the wound
The blood cools the pain
Now I can reach in with a finger
I feel for the sharpness
It is moving with the cunning of evolution
I feel bone
I rip at muscle and tendon
Until there is nothing left to hurt
Silenceā€¦
I remember to breathe
I clutch at the wound to slow the loss
I think of myself many years from now
A scar grows warm
I touch it lightly
Remembering








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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Monday, May 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, April 29, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Love the title. Love the Future. Really drew me in. Now I realize that not only was the title amazing, but the poem and poet are as well. ~*~tart~*~

  • Mistress Morbid On Friday, March 5, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Makes me hurt, and concerned..

  • Jonas On Monday, July 21, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    cyclical, running in circles, trying to heal as the venom just works deeper and in the attempts at alleaveation(sp?) of the symptoms more blood is lost...

  • maddin foxxxy On Monday, May 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    such an exellent, captivating...touching ending...and the whole poem aswell.

  • blackdarkness On Monday, May 12, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    a lot of feeling in this poem...goodwrite

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