Master

By Stranger

"Yes," he tells you "I can hide your pain"
As he points to a door
And the stars fall from the sky
Royal blue streams in their wake

"But I have this great unhappiness;
they say there is no cure" you reply
As he opens one door and closes another

"Perhaps sweet darling, perhaps
But the pain does not seek to cure;
It seeks to live" he explains
As he presses you to your knees

And darkness begins to flow from his eyes,
As dry leather tightens around joints and throat

And he opens his mouth so wide,
He swallows your voice

And he fills you so deep,
He steals your emptiness

Hot, red streaks appear upon your back and your breasts,
Replacing your doubts and questions

"Are you the healer of great sorrow?"
You ask with the arching of your back

"Yes, but not for thee"

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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • tonebone On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone (48)By person wrote:

    your actors are given no quarter

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    a terrific piece. the words have a lovely flow and distinctive imagery. This could almost be a surreal painting...hmmm... if you can see what I mean.

  • Sin On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    i can relate to this so much..thank you for sharing it ~kristy

  • maddin foxxxy On Friday, May 2, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    this cuts up right to my soul...great write! just great.....

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, May 1, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    Yes. Exactly how it is. Exactly. Brilliant.

  • Stranger On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    Coming from you. That is quite a compliment. Thank you.

  • KittyStryker On Friday, September 19, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    and again... (i have to stop rereading these...) that's exactly how it is. both parties come to the table with pain... and in easing each other, they ease themselves... ::sighs:: you've awoken the submissive i've been repressing.

  • KittyStryker On Friday, September 19, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    i don't know if i should thank you or curse you for it.

  • Jonas On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    opiate...

  • SnowQueen On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    Hot damn there stranger. Erotic and chilling.. I love it. Another sexy thriller from the writer i've become very interested in! Later

  • A former member wrote: God, I'm gonna cry. My bf & I are planning to lose our virginity to each other, and this is just...wow. Wonderful.

  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    dark and flowing... sexually co-dependant... speaks to me of the void of pure physical need

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