Cracked Windshield Eulogy (Lovesong of a wasted minute

By hate_doll

Ey e
s

Magnolia blossoms that glow
like
c ott
on b a l l

s

Twink el to
e
p oker chips

skirtin
s i l v e r
p e n

n n i es


in a

w ilting

throat


c ok
e
mirror
f r os ted


c mpl x n
o e io


c l
o c k s

mis

miss

pe l
l

d
e
s t
i
n
y


o
o


o
ps






m ssed


another
c h
a n
g e

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© 2007 hate_doll
Published on Thursday, May 31, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: As soon as I read this, my brain had to twist...and slow...and every word had to take shape like it was clambering together and assembling itself in lazy haste... Very interesting to read, and different from my usual idea of poetry. Very nice creativity in formatting!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, August 12, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Cool piece, I miss seeing new stuff from you! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • carlosjackal On Monday, June 25, 2007, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    This was like a fucked-up druggy trip, where the initial poetry of the high subsides into blank moments and confusion. Nicely done with some cool wordage. P.S. Good to see you posting again! -Carl

  • Anth On Thursday, May 31, 2007, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    i love this, it moves beautifully like trainwindow scenery at night, rain trickling down the windows, the way this excellently crafted poem did, clever and energetic

  • NikesRain On Thursday, April 3, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    anthony said it perfectly... wonderfully creative

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, May 31, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    your words d...r..i...p.. into a passion that i have missed and that has been lacking from most writes that i have read... i dont know where you went for a while, but im for sure happy to see you posting again. your words seem to suspend time.

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