with matt fitzwater

By Jonas

Touch
Disturbing the stillness
In calm
Semi-sobriety
Wishing and feeling
Touching
The reflections
Of wayside puddles
Taking the guise of the
Sky

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Published on Tuesday, February 8, 2000.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Friday, December 21, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    who is matt fitzwater

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    read it once, twice, three times - ahh - now i see (the reflections)EXCELLENT!

  • sixsixnine On Monday, August 9, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    cryptic kill love how real this feels.. *669*

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Skillful indeed..

  • stormtalk On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    Simple and skillful, but with a hint of "there's more to this than you see." I like it... time to go read more!

  • Crystal Passion On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    Oh my... I have read this many times as well and eachtime I have found a new facet to enjoy in this jewel you have created. Thank you so much for sharing. -Kryz

  • A former member wrote: Ya know... i always hate to say something is "deep" or whatever cuz... what if the author just meant what they said or it was about cheese or something and i feel dumb. but this one is... not shallow #flower#

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, February 19, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    very subtle.

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, January 30, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    I've read this over at least 4 times now...and I'm not quite sure what to say about it...it is something very deep and still and quiet with the consistancy of olive oil... and the clarity of scratched crystal...mmm...I'm book marking this one...

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